Elric had a hard time but he finally did it! …

Comment on The Docks: Episode 12 by Feidor S. LaView.

Elric had a hard time but he finally did it! Let’s see whether Helene can open her mind.

This is a very nice and atmospheric scene. Love the feeling that there’s a vast outer world surrounding all these people.

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